Score: 8

"Looks good, my critique on this film...."

submission: Fallen Angel Ep. 1 (Pt1)

date: October 25, 2008

It's looks beautifully crafted. The only criticism I would have to say about this short animation is that the file size could be smaller for the amount of film time given. I guess it's really hard to avoid since you've place a lot of CG effect into Flash which ate a lot of memory. I also thought that the introduction was a little drown out with information that people really don't care how or what has happened, as long as they get to see pretty colors and flashes, the audience really don't care about how deep is the storyline, especially when the audience is here to look at a short film for a .... short time. Good job producing it. I believe that your presentation would look better if it was on 'The Big Screen'.